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PostSubject: Poetry I've written.   Fri Feb 19, 2010 9:04 pm

I wrote this in October of 2007. It's called Fell Shadow. Please feel free to add any thoughts or complaints. I'll be using this thread to post some of my other poetry as well, so if you enjoy this one, you'll have something to look forward to. Alright, no more stalling. Here's Fell Shadow.


I look around...
Darkness

All i see.. is Darkness
It surrounds me...
suffocating all that i know..

I pray and pray that it will leave..
but it wont.


why? i ask.. wondering in this shadow..
why has all light gone from this place?
why is there no trace of hope?
or happiness?
or even a smile?


but oh well, i think..

theres nothing i can do
except wait out the darkness...
outlast it, like i have before...

nothing new... ive seen it...
is that all you have, shadow?
is this your entire salvo?
this hopeless, lightless darkness?
you are weak...

and i will conquer you...

fell shadow, i beseech thee, leave me...
you have no power here...
i have won yet another fight...
as you return home on your shield..

again, you have no power here....
so leave..
begone.
go!



until next time...
fell shadow...
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry I've written.   Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:29 am

awsome!!!

no mater how bleak things get there is always the sunny side tho it might be hard to c at times.

the small seemingless glimmer of hope in the darkness.

amazing poem
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry I've written.   Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:11 am

Excellent work!!

The outwaiting of darkness is all we can do sometimes.

I like the way you have set it up.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry I've written.   Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:01 pm

On June 17th, 2001, Father's Day, my family and I took a trip to The Lake O' The Pines in East Texas. My stepfather, Bobby Ray Kincaid Jr., took me on my first jet-ski ride. A speedboat full of drunken teenagers was racing along the waves and t-boned our jet-ski. My right leg was caught in the propellor, and it was left scarred. The front of the boat struck my stepdad in the head. He would later pass away, on the way to shore.
On January 2nd, 2009, my grandfather, Bobby Ray Kincaid Sr., after suffering through numerous physical disabilities throughout his life, succumbed and also passed away.
My only regret was never telling either of those great men, who taught me so much, how much I loved and appreciated them. On January 9th, 2009, I wrote "How Much I Loved You," a poem I dedicated to both of these men.

I never told you,
How much I loved you,
I never bothered,
To take the time.
I never told you,
How much I cared.
I never bothered,
To show a sign.
I never told you,
How much I needed you.
I never bothered,
To elaborate.
I never told you,
How much I loved you.
I never bothered,
Until it was too late.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry I've written.   Mon Mar 08, 2010 5:49 pm

I know that regret in full Shel. It never goes away but the pain it causes does fade after time.

This poem is even better than the first one.

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